Strengths and Weaknesses

Paper 1
Strengths:
1 Internal citations seem to be correct.
2 Used a variety of quotes from a credible source such as a professor
3 it is in the correct apa style
Weaknesses:
1 Giant paragraphs that could be shortened to increase readability
2 Uses the generic and basic transitions "first, next final"
3 Only uses the interview twice as evidence, interview was lacking
Paper 2
Strengths:
1 has a strong introduction, successfully introduces the topic etc
2 has a lot of evidence
3 evidence is essentially synthesized
Weaknesses:
1 internal citations are wrong and missing
2 quotes are just dropped into the essay. does not explain the quotes well
3 very few sources listed on citation page
Paper 3
Strengths:
1 strong introduction introduces topic and what creative writing means to them
2 good in text citations
3 elaborates on how creative writing in academic writing is different than in non academic writing
Weaknesses:
1 conclusion is weak
2 I don't know if the interview was necessarily included
3 repetitive. The entire paper feels very repetitive
Paper 4
Strengths:
1 strong transitions
2 reference page is in the appropriate APA style
3 ideas and thoughts are thoroughly explained
Weaknesses:
1 just dumps quotes into paragraphs
2 does not really use interview
3 hard to read/ low readability( not thought out well)
Paper 5
Strengths:
1 strong introduction and conclusion
2 transitions helps readability
3 uses a lot of evidence
Weaknesses:
1 some grammar and spacing errors
2 does a poor job when explaining evidence
3 does not really use interview
Paper 6
Strengths:
1 introduction catches my attention and maintains it
2 organization helps readability
3 Uses the APA style for their evidence
Weaknesses:
1 person who they interviewed does not really relate to his major
2 some of his evidence is weird and grainy images
3 some of his evidence is poorly explained